vox nihili

The story starts to move again in here, I hope you enjoy it. ..... Three days later, Verdeyan lay downstairs at the hearth, across from Asabet. The damp chill of ...

So far, this is a very interesting piece. It's pretty original, the lion cross-breeds and such. I enjoyed the suspense, but there are things that can be worked on: 1) ...

I made a few of the changes you had all suggested. Thanks!

Foreign Bloom Precious, pliant seed, you , washed on this new land by jealous current, are pitiable. ' you' is not really needed in this sentence; it's already apparent you ...

I haven't read the other parts, so if I point out something that makes sense in the context of the novel, don't mind me. XD He made his way up ...

Mail Order From Heaven .... This February Emotions, cold as the winter wind Were running through my head I sat in my wheelchair, listening Afraid of what was to come. ...

This is an absolutely haunting piece. I read the entire thing in a few minutes, completely transfixed. The detail is stunning, and the tone....I don't know the word for it. ...

Verdeyan sat in the sunlight, stretching her wings, admiring the glint of light off her shining silver feathers. With a graceful twist of her body, she leapt off the branch ...

This is part of a novel. See the tab at the top to read the rest. … “What are you doing, lying there like a slob!” Jonalla shouted, shoving Verdeyan ...

I love the concept. It reminds me of a poem by Robert Louis Stevenson. Yours is a bit different from his, though, a bit less well, childish. I really like ...

*Note* this is part of a novel. See the tab at the top to read the preceding segments. …… He made his way up the stairs, scraping his toes against ...

This is a really heart-touching pretense. Wow. It's got great potential. A few adjustments will go a long way to making this piece really shine. One: format. If you look ...

I'll review pretty much anything. Some basic guidelines, though: 1) Please try to correct typos before posting it. 2) I'll review it in my time, just leave me a link. ...

A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far as eye can see. On a plinth in a square, quite and stoic Quiet not 'quite' No ...

Thanks for the input, guys! I'll use better images when I can. I also added a couple more images. thanks again! -Voxina